iván BRAVE


“Floto sobre tú” — 8 lines

21 March 2017
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Me fascina la combinación de “na” y “va,” y la de “na” y “ve,” casi tanto como la de las silabas de mi nombre al revés. Primero empecé con estas líneas:

“Un navío vacío

Navega vagamente”

Luego las tire al agua, y las volví a pescar como las ocho de “Floto sobre tú,” que también combinan el pronombre personal y el adjetivo posesivo tú/tu. Ahora que lo pienso, el tú/tu me hace acordar al pitito del navío de Mickey Mouse.

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I am facinated by the “na” and “va,” and the “na” and “ve” combination, almost as much as the one from the two syllables of my name backwards. First I wrote:

“Un navío vacío

Navega vagamente”

Then I threw them in the water, and what I fished out were the eight of the poem “Floto sobre tú,” which also played with the two forms of the word tú/tu. Now that I think about it, it sort of sounds like the too-too of the whistle on Mickey Mouse’s ship.

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